Šoro ande vastja,
U plamenu mojih otaca.
Ekh čib phadji,
Thaj mujja ratjvarde.
Ali, mesečina je,
Na našem pepelu.
Is this your work? It’s amazing.
It is & thank you! I don’t know if the Serbian is completely correct, though.
It’s all good (”otaca” is an archaic version of the word ”očeva”, just to let you know if you weren’t aware of it, but it makes effective poetry). Your style kind of reminds me of Vasko Popa’s, who was a poet from Vojvodina of Romanian heritage *minority feels*